Assignment: Need to use the professor feedback to edit the essay attached. Professor Feedback: 1. You missed some very specific directions for this paper. It is argumentative paper with some researc

Assignment: Need to use the professor feedback to edit the essay attached.

Professor Feedback:1. You missed some very specific directions for this paper. It is argumentative paper with some research. you need to take a side.

2.    Structure/organization of essay definitely needs work. Do not have announcements like this in the introduction.  In one of the body paragraphs, you will briefly acknowledge a point from the other side, but then after you will explain how that point is not as important or directly counter it.

3.    Develop conclusion more.

4.    Works Cited page needs to be in alphabetical order. Also, containers on work cited page should italicized. Your last source is also missing the container name.

5.    In-text citations for MLA use author's last name and page/paragraph number (not year of publication). Also, do not put a comma after the last name in the citation.