Because the whole idea of the paper is to bring out the alarming figures of the problem(e.

I am attaching my paper. I need your help in adding the figures and alarming facts to the passage. Because the whole idea of the paper is to bring out the alarming figures of the problem(e.g. like how many people are suffering and in what percentage, so on so forth) that Grayston Foundation that is trying to solve. The main point of the paper is to show how serious the problem is and draw the readers attention by letting them know the figures and facts. (in one page)