can someone help me please with the grammar and proofreading. The Hunger Games takes violence as entertainment to the ultimate extreme,

can someone help me please with the grammar and proofreading.

The Hunger Games takes "violence as entertainment" to the ultimate extreme, and we can probably all agree that watching children kill other children is a bad idea. But how far can society go in condoning violence? Many "reality" shows today offer examples of violence among real human beings, whether a Real Housewife yelling bleeped out words at one of her castmates, Survivor contestants scheming against each other, or wrestlers tossing each other around.