Can someone help me tighten, and rewrite my poem in fewer and shorter stanzas please. My city is beautiful So big and happy It has an intense beauty

Can someone help me tighten, and rewrite my poem in fewer and shorter stanzas please.

My city is beautiful

So big and happy

It has an intense beauty

That looks like a daisy 

There is a train that blares early

Bus carrying the people

There is school for everyone.And a new hospital. 

The church rings the bell

When the hours go by

Shops open the doors

And the trade beings to move 

The people who live here

Comes from all states

And are welcomed

And live in peace 

Oh! Wonderful city!

What makes me live here

It has schools, sports

Cultures and recreations.