Dear Tutor, Please review below draft and add some mention. Thank you, "My business idea is opening a local hair salon.

Dear Tutor,Please review below draft and add some mention. Thank you,"My business idea is opening a local hair salon. I saw a lot of business some local hair salons to business longer than restaurant, furniture store, and fancy toy store, etc. Because the men will make up about sixty five percentage of the salons client, this is due to the men having at least two to third week’s shorter hair cutting cycles. In local areas in the particular, there seems to be a high income of the stylists that work inside them. Hair salons often have many competitors and must have strong marketing plans to stay profitable. There are many ways to keep top of mind with customers and bring in new clients with a promotional marketing plan, Internet advertising is very important today, with website with pictures of the hair salon and contact information. Also I must to learn techniques and develop my own skills in hairstyling. The success in this business is influenced by the ability of the hair salon owners to provide consumer satisfaction. Customers can be all kinds of men, women, and kids. Consumers will be the same as customers. The market is now becoming competitive and thus need a proper planning about the same.