Dropbox FeedbackOverall Feedback I like that you did research for this. Also, I like Newman's work. However, I think three things are missing. First, you need an intro paragraph. This paragraph should

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I like that you did research for this. Also, I like Newman's work. However, I think three things are missing. First, you need an intro paragraph. This paragraph should introduce the topic, go over the themes of the paper to be discussed, and, most importantly, state your thesis, i.e. the argument of your paper. This is the second thing. Now, at the end it sounds like you are arguing in favor of Bakunin's anarchist approach. But then you say something about a role for government. You need to square that. Is he mostly right but we still need government? If so, why? You can probably take out some of the biography of Bakunin to make space for answering this important question. Finally, have a conclusion paragraph where you just summarize what the paper was about and restate the thesis.