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Good. For more credit, handle the criticism that racial and gender humor is actually a vital tool for combatting racism and sexism, and so it is not so much a matter of avoiding it as doing it right. But to do it right, first of all the intentions have to be right. In Imus's case, I don't think his intentions were bad. But he was getting sloppy with execution. (Put changes in bold so I can see what you did in your rewrite.)
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