Edit my Essay to be the same as the comments

My Profesor comment: The main issue here is that I see a lack of interface with course materials from Blackboard and the text. Go back and rewrite this for more credit incoroporating some of the key course concepts into your discussion. Also, develop your thoughts according to the dialectic essay format, as described in Course Information postings.

I need the essay to be the Same as his comment. I attached the course documents and the essay Also I need it to be 900 words.