edit of my essay

i got some comment for my essay from my professor, i have wrote each comment next to thier part with yellow color and underlined.

here a brief explation for the comments

( edit the reference as footnote Chicago style )

( make each part on the paper relate to each other)

( summarize the introduction to one paper)

( historical question should be from the source and answer it from the source)

(use only the source on the attach file )

(please see the source first then read the essay and edit after that )

( read all the comment that with yellow color and underlined )

and here Instructions for the paper make sure each part like this. Then, you will do the following:

1. Choose a topic: Choose an historical event, trend, or topic. Explain why you have chosen this event, topic, or trend and how the two primary sources you have chosen relate to it.

1. Compare and Contrast: Find two points of commonality between the two sources in regards to the topic you have chosen. Then, identify to points at which the two sources disagree.

1. Consensus/Disagreement: Tell your reader what the similarities and/or differences in the two sources reveal about the topic you have chosen.

1. Historical Question: Pose a historical question that you would be able to answer using these two sources. As with the Primary Source Analysis assignment, the question you pose should help you to reconstruct something about the way that people lived in the past. Please avoid reading comprehension questions, moral-ethical questions, and counterfactuals.

 Your final response should be 700-1000 words in length. You must use Chicago Style footnotes to document all of the sources that you draw information from.