eng 215 discussion question

"Compare Two Versions of the Same Article by an Author"  Please respond to the following:

• Read the two (2) versions of the article titled: “The Objectification of Women. Whose Fault Is it?” by Santi DeRosa in Chapter 8. Identify the thesis statement of each version. Summarize the second or final version. Note any changes between the first and the second version. Indicate if the thesis statement changed. Discuss your agreement or disagreement with DeRosa’s views. 
• Identify three (3) changes the writer made between the first and second version. Speculate on reasons the writer made the changes.