essay check writing and footnotes

Hi, thank you would like to take my work.my topic is: Opium production and consumption in canada. This paper need 1750---2000 words and Chicago style. it need at least four recent academic secondary sources that provide.  and i already find three good for this topic, so please help me check the  others correctly.

What I need:

• check the gramma and mistake
• check the Chicago structure
• check the footnotes 

1      W. L. Mackenzie King, C.M.G., Deputy Minister of Labour, on the need for the suppression of the opium traffic in Canada.

http://govinfocollections.library.utoronto.ca/islandora/object/govinfo1%3A93066#page/1/mode/2up

2 "Chinks Pay Heavily for 'Hitting Pipe'": The Perception and Enforcement of Canada's New Drug Laws in Rural and Northern British Columbia, 1908-30 by Yvan prkachin

http://ojs.library.ubc.ca/index.php/bcstudies/article/view/662

3 Chinese opium trade and manufacture in British Columbia, 1858-1908.Lai, David Chuenyan

http://web.b.ebscohost.com.ezproxy.library.uvic.ca/ehost/detail/detail?vid=2&sid=fe421cec-8f42-43fb-b8da6130d9afad0%40sessionmgr101&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZSZzY29wZT1zaXRl#AN=2225957&db=a9h

Academic sources: 

·       Books or articles written by historian after 1985

·       Books published by a university press and peer-reviewed articles

·       Articles should be at least 15 pages long

·       Articles and books must have footnotes or otherwise reference all evidence to specific resources

Qualisies of a Good essay:

·       Critical analysis

·       Clear arguement and organization

·       Strong evidence

·       Footnotes and bibiography

·       Good writing style

In the end, because i am an international student. i dont need the sectence too difficult or complex. I hope you can use the specific words and clear structure to write this essay. Thanks.