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ESSAY HELP: how do I correct following 3 (TW4,TW5, TW7) errors in my essay - TW4 - This does not tie well to the first point in the TS.
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how do I correct following 3 (TW4,TW5, TW7) errors in my essay -
TW4 - This does not tie well to the first point in the TS.
TW5 - I think you want this to be the tie to the second point, but it should be located as the first or second sentence of this paragraph and it should show a more clear connection.
