First draft 2 "Lauren, I'm home!" called Ms. Clary as she turned the key in the door. "Come sit down, I have some exciting news!" She was thrilled at the idea of moving and was sure her daughter would

First draft

2 "Lauren, I'm home!" called Ms. Clary as she turned the key in the door. "Come sit down, I have some exciting news!" She was thrilled at the idea of moving and was sure her daughter would share her enthusiasm.

Lauren sat down next to her mother on the couch. Her heart raced because she just knew her mother was going to announce that they were finally getting a puppy. The young girl's face fell as she heard her mother's voice, suddenly sounding distant and tinny, saying "...so we will move in two weeks. My new job will be super and you'll just love the school there!"

Which BEST compares or contrasts section 2 of the "Best Friends" story with section 2 of the first draft?

A) Only section 2 of the "Best Friends" story reveals the thoughts of Lauren's mother.

B) Both use formal language to show how important the subject of moving is to the characters.

C) Both use dialogue and rhymes to express the emotions of the characters.

D) Only the first draft uses dialogue, but both include Lauren's thoughts or feelings.