Follow my teacher's instruction: For the lyrics: -Please work on the syllable count and rhyming. I noticed that that didn’t match up at times. For example, if lines 3 and 4 in the ghost song rhyme, yo

Follow my teacher's instruction:

For the lyrics:

-Please work on the syllable count and rhyming. I noticed that that didn’t match up at times. For example, if lines 3 and 4 in the ghost song rhyme, yours should as well in lines 3 and 4. Cool? 

- I suggest adding some of the details from the reflection into the song.

For the essay:

- Add more details.

- I suggest adding transitions so it read with more connection (flow) and not like it’s answering a list of questions.