For this final assignment, students will be required to edit a paragraph using the skills they learned throughout the semester. The following

For this final assignment, students will be required to edit a paragraph using the skills they learned throughout the semester. The following paragraph includes 10 errors — worth two points each — that need to be corrected in a new paragraph. Points will be deducted for an new errors introduced into the paragraph. Additionally, an 11th error has been included, and is worth two bonus points.

Here is the paragraph to edit:

Last week my family members, whom live all across the United States, came together to enjoy a thanksgiving meal. We ate turkey, yams and cranberry sauce, and, for desert, we enjoyed pumpkin pie, that complimented the meal. Afterward, I challenged my cousins to a game, the winners were them. Next, we prepared some holiday cards to send to our friends. The cards featured a heard of mooses, and we signed them: "Happy holidays from the Robbins'."