Hello. I handed in an English paper rough draft and received feedback from my teacher about things I have to fix. I am seeking someone who knows how to write scenes about literacy narratives and a ref

Hello. I handed in an English paper rough draft and received feedback from my teacher about things I have to fix. I am seeking someone who knows how to write scenes about literacy narratives and a reflection paper on the scene. I will attach all the rubrics and my teacher's comments to my paper here to improve it and make it right. I need the paper to be more storytelling and showing and to add more literacy sponsors (people, places, things), etc. 

So, I need my rough draft to be fully edited into a final draft with a complete rubric, and feel free to make up the stories and all of that. I also uploaded two previous scene papers, which you could use as a guide on what to write about. 

Here are all the files, please feel free to ask me anything, I will be checking frequently in order to answer your questions. 

www.mediafire.com/folder/ieo6454qdw4yd/english