Here is my first draft of the paper. Revise it and should complete and follow all the instruction and following section. It looks like my first draft paper needs editing. Please make corrections to m

Here is my first draft of the paper. Revise it and should complete and follow all the instruction and following section.

It looks like my first draft paper needs editing. Please make corrections to make the perfect paper according to the instruction.

Here is link of first draft paper

https://www.mediafire.com/file/wsqy9jo7u7us5d0/Draft_Research_Paper_%25231.docx/file

For Research Proposals papers, be sure to include the following sections:

• Title Page
• Abstract
• Introduction
• Background (Literature Review)
• Hypothesis (along with expected outcomes)
• Methods
• References (at least 7 references)
• You must have at least 7 pages