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(please fix thefragment error) : (In the morning.) (Because Jim is a fantastic tennis player.)

(please fix comma/punctuation errors) : (When Freddie was young his parents took him to London England Paris France and Milan Italy.) (Julie and Carl practice playing banjo because they are in a band together and they want to become famous musicians.)

(please fix the point of view shift error): (When I went snorkeling off the coast of Belize, you could see sharks in the water.) (People need to be careful when swimming along the coast because you could get stung by a jellyfish.)

(please fix the pronoun clarity/agreement error): (When I went to the car dealership, they told me my warranty would cover everything.) (The nurse said that I should replace my mercury thermometer because they can be a hazard if it breaks.)