Hi, English is not my first language and I would like if you will give me feedback on my English (grammar, vocabulary etc.) in something that I...

Hi, English is not my first language and I would like if you will give me feedback on my English (grammar, vocabulary etc.) in something that I wrote. Thank you !

Question 1

Amaze Inc. uses the behavioral approach in most aspects of the organization's practice. The company uses Mary Parker Follet's and Chester Barnard's theory to achieve company's goals.