Hi I need my college English paper edited. The topic is Urban v.s Suburban education quality.

Hi I need my college English paper edited. The topic is Urban v.s Suburban education quality. I need major help rewriting my conclusion paragraph. My teacher told me that I need to make a stance instead of solving the problem. I also need the peer review sheet filled out so I can hand it in. Thanks

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Celia GattereauUrban V.S Suburban Education A student’s geographical location should not determine the quality of their education,however, for most school systems in America it does. When...