I am having a hard time trying to put the best suggestions into these two documents. Below is what was asked of me to do. I have completed several...

I am having a hard time trying to put the best suggestions into these two documents. Below is what was asked of me to do. I have completed several other different ones but stuck on these. Below are the documents needing to be edited. Your edits will be a huge help as I can further elaborate on your input.

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Please review and critique the following External Network Penetration Scoping Worksheet and Engagement Draft document. Is there anything that should be written differently to make things clearer, add or subtract? P