I am pretty bad with commas so I just want to know if one is needed before quot;especiallyquot; and if there any other errors in the sentences.

I need help with grammar. I am pretty bad with commas so I just want to know if one is needed before "especially" and if there any other errors in the sentences. They are not in order I just pasted a few that I need help with. Thanks!

In today's society, we regret many things after we say them, especially admitting your love to someone who does not love you back.

The last sentence of the first paragraph of this paper sparked something else in me . It is very true that if you voice your opinion people will listen; in other cases people will take it the wrong way. Society looks at opinions as something you believe in. I feel as if this sentence could be worded differently. Sometimes using first person can take away from meaning of the paper.

When we are born we are automatically put into the world with already prescribed ways in which we should act.