I need help to rewrite my lab report

i need help to rewrite my lab report for parts that I got bad points on. So, I attached my orinal lab report and my lab notebook nots as well as the the paper where my teacher showed me where should I rewrite and make it a good report to be submit it for final draft. 

i attached some of my lab instructure and its as the same as my lab notbook notes but in case my hand writing is not clear and I ADD A GUIDLINE TO FOLLOW. 

LET ME KNOW IF U HAVE ANY QUESTION