I wrote a rough draft of an argumentative essay for my English class, the final draft is due tonight and I am looking for someone to review my rough draft, give me as much feedback as they can on it,

I wrote a rough draft of an argumentative essay for my English class, the final draft is due tonight and I am looking for someone to review my rough draft, give me as much feedback as they can on it, finish it and polish it if possible. I will leave the instructions and the essay below.

The essay must be written in MLA format and must be from 1,000 to 1,500 words.

THE ESSAY 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14fBwmSiR6n-q7wcqCokOcu6GYdPHI1nMdxHObkDqyUc/edit?usp=sharing