If you would like extra help on your term paper and you have finished writing a draft of it, please submit it here and I will go over it. If you fix all of the problems I point out, you will learn mo

If you would like extra help on your term paper and you have finished writing a draft of it, please submit it here and I will go over it.  If you fix all of the problems I point out, you will learn more about the writing process, and get much better grade on your final draft when you turn it in at the end of the semester.  For me you really give you any help, I need a complete draft to work from, so please do not submit partial drafts.  This is not required, and is not graded, but is highly recommended.

If you have questions on how to write your term paper, please see the How To Write In History Module. In the Module, you will find a Brief Guide To Writing a History Paper and video links for Advice and Tips, Forming an Introduction, Structuring the Main Body of your term paper, and Forming a Conclusion for your paper.

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Now that you have chosen a topic and found some sources, I would like you to submit an outline of your paper.  At this point it should be a very basic outline, and include information for your introduction, three main body topics, and a conclusion.  You should use Word to write this, as it has a outlining feature that will help you with formatting (.  Show me where you are going to use your sources, what information you are getting from them, and in general what you are going to write about.  I will then give you feed back to show you if you are on the right path and what you need to do to begin writing.  Remember, there is a page in Module 2 that shows how to get Word to create an outline for you.

Note: When you tell me where you will use your sources, please do not just say something like "Secondary Source Here".  Actually tell me what source.

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This is a very good foundation for an outline that illustrates how you will support your overall argument. Well done! Make sure to provide specific details into your argument for each section and to create short sub topics rather than paragraphs to organize your thoughts. That will keep you on target for your paper rather than going on tangents.

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