organizational, Analysis Paper Final draft

i have done the first part of the analysis paper for me 2 weeks ago and my professor graded it for me and I will attached to the file bellow. I want from you to do the second part of the paper and you will find the instructor file bellow too. Please I want to do the paper as best as you can because I need to get an A on this final paper.

My offer is $50 and I really hope that you will do your best

this paper worth 100 points, so I wish that you can help me to get an A on this paper and I want you to read the first paper just to have an idea about what she is expecting from me in this final paper.