Original Paragraph Last week my family members, whom live all across the United States, came together to enjoy a thanksgiving meal.

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Last week my family members, whom live all across the United States, came together to enjoy a thanksgiving meal. We ate turkey, yams and cranberry sauce, and, for desert, we enjoyed pumpkin pie, that complimented the meal. Afterward, I challenged my cousins to a game, the winners were them. Next, we prepared some holiday cards to send to our friends. The cards featured a heard of mooses, and we signed them: "Happy holidays from the Robbins'."