Persuasive essay editing FINAL DRAFT

THIS WILL BE THE FINAL DRAFT

Edit the paper by following the comments provided by my classmates. You must folllow the comments of Seval Karakoc and adress them in the paper since she is the instructor. I need the paper to be at lease 8 pages in total after editing (not including figures and references section). All sources needed for the paper are in refrences section. 

I WILL PAY YOU A GOOD MONEY BUT NEED A GREAT WRITING