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Please fix the grammar and the writing style below.

Please fix the grammar and the writing style below. Thanks

The job I would love to do is to be a pilot but after I tried my wife wasn't happy when I need it to stay for days in California while she was dealing with kids, family, and church in Texas. Right now I am working in Insurance Agency and I am planning to own one very soon. The skills I need to do this job are many. One of them will be communication skills. I will need it to present the benefit of the product to the prospect that way the prospect wont just look at the price. I have gain this skills thru the years studying in Ashford Univeristy. One way that I present the product when we are more expensive than other companies is like going to the grocery store vs going to the flea market. You will find quality products, and better service instead of dealing with people that they probably would love to be sleeping on a Sunday morning.  Another skill will be the marketing skill, and this is not only to market myself but to market the company in many ways. I took many marketing classes in Ashford and Ive been applying what I learned here.

Also my writing skills net to get to another level. I used writing for everythinig at my work. I used it to communicate with my peers. To email quotes to prospects, and also to email memos. My grammar need to improved, and I want this to happen without the need of Word or Grammarly. I would love to learn in a way where I can make corrections to others. Writing skills has been getting betters thru the years. When I moved to Texas from Puerto Rico I didn't speak English at all I need it to ask everyone how to translate stuff.

Once I get my degree next month I will open my agency and for now it will be just myself while I start getting enough customers to pay someone else in case that person don't sell as expected. I know everything will be great and I will have a great future. I will keep flying but just for pleasure like a few months ago I fly from Texas to the Bahamas and that was fun because my wife was with me with a scary face.

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