Please Redo attached paper based on the teacher feedback. Teachers Feedback: Most of the paper will need to be re-written to better fit the argument in your thesis--supportive arguments (claims) are n

Please Redo attached paper based on the teacher feedback.

Teachers Feedback: Most of the paper will need to be re-written to better fit the argument in your thesis--supportive arguments (claims) are needed for how storytelling itself (within these stories) is influencing the identities you're analyzing (Twyla's, Roberta's, and Harold Green's). The paper should be a four to five paragraph essay (with body paragraphs being 7-12 sentences long). See detailed feedback in canvas document. I think the paper has a lot of potential to be great with a couple more revisions.