Proofread my essay

Proofread my essay and fix it according to all the comments given. Add the subheadings before every main point and follow these two rubrics.

Elements

Points

Content

Introduction â ½ page

Includes attention getter

____________/1

Provides appropriate entry to topic

____________/3

States research question(s)/research thesis

____________/1

Body â 8-9 pages

Presents a structured body that includes all fully developed sections of paper

____________/20

Includes headings that reflect paper organization

____________/5

Supports points/arguments with credible source material and cites definitions of key terms/ideas as applicable

____________/20

Synthesizes multiple sources

____________/15

Shows evidence of critical thinking and in-depth analysis

____________/5

Conclusion â ½ page

Restates main points and/or answers research question(s)

____________/5

References â 1 or more pages

Contains all and only cited texts

____________/2

Mechanics

Is accurate in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, word choice, and use of transitions

____________/10

Citations

Uses correct APA in-text citations

____________/3

Includes correct APA references

____________/2

Format/layout

Follows APA page layout (title page, running head, headings, font)

____________/3

Revision

Incorporates feedback from Working Draft

____________/5

Total

____________/100

Elements

Points

Content

Title Page

Abstract and Key Words

Summarizes research paper in about 150 words

_____/4

Lists 3-5 key words

_____/1

Introduction â up to 1 page

Includes attention getter

_____/1

Provides appropriate entry to the topic

_____/2

States research question(s)/research thesis

_____/2

Body â 9-11 pages

Presents a well-structured and logically argued discussion

_____/15

Includes headings that reflect the paper organization

_____/3

Supports all points/arguments with credible source material and cites definitions of key terms/ideas as applicable

_____/15

Synthesizes multiple sources

_____/7

Shows originality, critical thinking and in-depth analysis

_____/10

Conclusion â up to 1 page

Restates main points and/or answers the research question(s)

_____/3

Comes to logical conclusion from evidence

_____/3

Makes final comment(s)

_____/2

References

Contains all and only the cited texts

_____/2

Style

Entire paper

Is polished in tone and style appropriate for academic writing

_____/5

Mechanics

Entire paper

Is accurate in grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, word choice, and transitions, using variety in sentence structure

_____/10

Citations

Entire paper

Uses correct APA in-text citations

_____/2

Includes correct APA references

_____/3

Format/ Layout

Entire paper

Follows APA page layout (title page, running head, headings, font, etc.)

_____/5

Revision

Incorporates feedback from the First Full Draft

_____/5

Total

_____/100