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Writing Essay Review:Please review my 1st essay draft. Make any needed changes that you see fit. Any changes made, please highlight or make bold so I may compare your corrected work to my original 1st draft.Please note: My punctuation, grammar, spelling, sentence structure is somewhat poor.Attached is a copy of my first draft.