Ps: hi Kristen, please revise the paper, and you can change the structure if you feel better, please also give me a citation at the end and the

hi KristenMay I ask if you can help me to revise the paper. help me to correct the grammar and structure. and hope you can help me to add more critical thinking on the paper, make it looks like an research paper. you also can use the source you find to support the paper. but please use the citation, food notes and so on. I also need a biographical review. I will attach mine to you. thanks