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read those essays and write a feed back for each one
Use these guidelines to give helpful feedback please.
essay structure
Does the writer have a thesis that is arguable?
Does the writer have an introduction, three body paragraphs and a conclusion?
What specific examples does the writer use to prove thesis:
body paragraph structure
Does each body paragraph have an effective topic sentences?
Does each paragraph have a reference to a specific source?
Is each piece of evidence used explained?
Does the writer link each body paragraph back to the thesis?
spelling, capitalization, grammatical errors, subject-verb agreement, run-ons or fragments?