Revise and rewrite: Revision of final paper draft using the peer review worksheet Please check the "Peer view worksheet" and see if there is any missing points or thing you need to change and add on t

Revise and rewrite: Revision of final paper draft using the peer review worksheet

Please check the "Peer view worksheet" and see if there is any missing points or thing you need to change and add on the "EEMB 138 paper". Correct it for the final version of this paper. Hope you can help me out with a better paper. I also attached the material that you may need. Thanks.