revise my essay.

I need you to revise my essay.

1. I need a introduction and conculsion with a clear thesis statement

2. You can delete something but at lease have 5 pages. 

3.Every body paragragh should have a subtopic inculded and remember mention the subtopic at the end of every body paragraph

4. Follow the guide line I gave you. Your revise is all follow the guide in order to get an "A"