Revising Messages: Conciseness Condense the following sentences to as few words as pos- sible; revise as needed to maintain clarity and sense.

Revising Messages: Conciseness Condense the following sentences to as few words as pos- sible; revise as needed to maintain clarity and sense. a. We are of the conviction that writing is important. b. In all probability, we re likely to have a price increase. c. Our goals include making a determination about that in the near future. d. When all is said and done at the conclusion of this experiment, I d like to summarize the final windup. e. After a trial period of three weeks, during which time she worked for a total of 15 full working days, we found her work was sufficiently satisfactory so that we offered her full-time workRevising Messages: Modifiers Remove all the unnecessary modifiers from the following sentences. a. Tremendously high pay increases were given to the extraordinarily skilled and extremely conscientious employees. b. The union s proposals were highly inflationary, extremely demanding, and exceptionally bold.