s of this essay for me? Like how is it organised? How does it interest the reader? Are the arguments logical? Is the support convincing to the reader?...

Can you help explain the effectiveness of this essay for me? Like how is it organised? How does it interest the reader? Are the arguments logical? Is the support convincing to the reader? Does the evidence actually prove the point the author is trying to make? Stuff like that. There is no need to answer all these questions, just give easy examples I could use. 

Essay is attached at the bottom. Thank you!