The document is the essay I already wrote, the structures are good but the body paragraphs are not strong enough. The photo is the guide of how to develop the body paragraphs, just follow that and exp

The document is the essay I already wrote, the structures are good but the body paragraphs are not strong enough. The photo is the guide of how to develop the body paragraphs, just follow that and expand the body paragraphs. You just need to analyze more about the quotations. Each quotation needs to have at least 3 sentences to explain them and analyze how they support the topic sentence. Do not need to revise the introduction and conclusion part. I need it in 8 hours