Topic: It is not clear why Gregor in Kafka's The Metamorphosis has turned into a bug. Discuss several possible causes and then decide on one cause...

Please read the attached outline and answer the questions below, thanks.

• Does the outline contain an effective thesis? What is it and does it fit a topic from our assignment? How could it be improved?
• Does the outline focus on key causes or effects? Are any ideas minor or repetitive and could be deleted? Which one?
• How are the causes/effects organized? What is the pattern? How effective is the organization?
• Which other causes or effects could be included in the essay?
• Does the reader need any background information? Which information is needed or would be helpful?
• Does the outline stay on topic or are any off-topic details included?
• What do you think is an important point the writer should keep in mind when writing the first draft?