Would you be able to edit this 1200 word paper for me?

Would you be able to edit this 1200 word paper for me?

Please read the assignment details and make any revisions that you feel are necessary.

Feel free to make any comments as well. Keep in mind that this is for a second year sociology course in university. 

Please edit this thoroughly as it is a big part of my grade and is due tonight!

I would like to have it back ASAP so I can review all changes before submitting it!

Thank you very much in advance.