write a final decision paper based on my draft

topic: The revolution of the design of the guest room

the first attachment is my draft. it's like a outline. Ues the point from my draft. You can get all the reauirements from the second attachment. So please read it carefully.

The final paper should be between 1800 and 2000 word, which is approximately six to seven pages of content in length not including the cover page, references or other attachments. It should be typed, double-spaced, 12 font with standard 1 inch margins top and bottom and 1.25 inch margins left and right (these are the default margins in MS Word). In addition to the six to seven pages you must attach a cover page with the title of your paper and your name and a page with your list of references. 

Plagiarism will not be tolerated. Do not try to pass off something copied from the Internet as your own original thought, I can tell the difference. If you use it, source (cite) it. 

Format requirements (15 pts.): Proper APA style (references & citations), correct paper format 

Spelling & Grammar (10 pts.): -2 points for each error. More than 10 errors and I start taking points from Content 

Content and research (25 pts.): Is the paper well researched, does the content relate to the subject and the research. 

Clear, convincing position/points (35 pts.): Can I determine your position/points and can I make a management decision based on your paper. 

This final position paper must be a minimum of 6 pages (1800 words) of content. In addition to the 6 pages of content you also must have a cover page with your name and the title of your paper and a page (or more) of the references cited in your paper in the correct APA format.