300-words feedback journal

Use the notes and feedback left by the instructor in a previous assignment to reflect on what you have learned so far.

First reflect on any feedback, record your thoughts, responses and reactions. Be sure to note questions you have, or any confusion that may arise.

[There will be additional memos due throughout the course, so please take note to the differences between letters and memos. A memorandum should be titled as such. Additionally, a subject line should be more specific. 

All correspondence should have an introduction, discussion and conclusion. These sections can be better indicated with the use of paragraphs. Using bullet points can also help break up the blocks of text. 

Please be sure to review comma usage. There are many opportunities for improvement. A great site to use is quickanddirtytips.com.]  It's my teacher's feedback. 

The first prompt is included to give an idea of journal expectations.

Watch the following short video:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uXQq4Ug1RIM

Grammar Girl | When to use a comma

After receiving feedback from the feasibility report assignment, reflect on the following:

Do you notice any comma errors? 

Do commas, in your writing, seem to be an important factor? 

Remember that journals should consider correct grammar and mechanics. 

Additional comma help can be found at: 

http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/where-do-i-use-commas

http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/comma-splice

And some common questions for you: The Journals are a place for you to reflect on your learning process throughout the course: What are the most important things you’ve learned? What has surprised you? What do you find difficult or confusing? In what ways have you seen your writing evolve? What questions do you have?