Any feedback, mostly on content over grammar at this point, would be appreciated.

This is my first draft of my core assignment for history 1302 at my Junior College. Any feedback, mostly on content over grammar at this point, would be appreciated. Also, the professor did not specify length, is this long enough, it is 4 pages and a ref page when in word and formatted?

The question asked was:

 identify and explain describe and discuss assess and evaluate discuss theas you view it.

This is my paper: