can someone help me proof read my essay. any input on what I need to change or how I can make sound better will be

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can someone help me proof read my essay. any input on what I need to change or how I can make sound better will be

greatly appreciated.

Whether students should wear a uniform to school or not, is a debatable topic in thesociety today. In this 21st century, it is all about fashion and the current style. One can buy andwear any...