Can you proof read my essay for proper grammer?

Can you proof read my essay for proper grammer?

 I grew up during a time where technology expansions was slow. The black & white television and the house phones land-line was our latest technology and it lasted for over 100 years. Today we have many options for buying and most of those options are updating every six months. Just a few months ago my smart-phone would not keep a charge, so I decided, maybe it's time for a new phone. It was a cheap phone I had for five years that I used primarily to talk and text. When I went into the phone store, I learned that my old phone was no longer available and the manufactory stopped making phones. The salesman suggested I purchase the LG Stylo 2 plus, he gave some background on the phones manufacture and gave me a list of features on the phone. It all sound like foreign language, I had no idea what he was talking about. I decided to go home to do my own research.

While doing a Google search. I can across an article entitled: LG Stylo 2 plus Full Review is it worth it? The author of the review is Paul Tech. Paul gives an objective description review of the phone than gives his opinion of its quality, he states "So this is my full detailed review for the LG Stylo 2 plus for Metro PCS this device is 4G lte-enabled 5.7 inch HD IPS touchscreen 13-megapixel rear-facing camera 5-megapixel front-facing camera 16 gigabytes of ROM 2 gigabytes of RAM 1.4 gigahertz octa-core processor and built-in stylus this is the best hundred and $149 device I've ever bought" (Twitter.com, 2017) .

 In paraphrasing Paul is saying " the LG Stylo 2 plus comes with many top features, that includes:4G lte,5.7 inch touchscreen,18 megapixel camera with 13 megapixel rear-facing  and 5 front-facing,16 GB RAM, 1.4 GB Octa-core processor, a built in pen and for $149 it is well worth (Twitter.com, 2017) .

I must admit just the sound of getting all those features caused me to get emotionally attached to this phone although I didn't know what any of it meant. I was impressed with the fact that Paul stated "this is the best hundred and $149 device I've ever bought" (Twitter.com, 2017). I have gone out to purchase this phone for myself. Although I only use about 2% of the features I agree with Paul. I have not had any problems with the phone and it appears to be a wise purchase.