Case Study Research Paper: Editing Only I will attach the paper; I need you to edit it according to the feedback I have received. Please modify the paper according to these suggestions: You mentioned

Case Study Research Paper: Editing Only

I will attach the paper; I need you to edit it according to the feedback I have received. 

Please modify the paper according to these suggestions:

• You mentioned that society is failing in Afghanistan. I think this is true, but it would be helpful to hear more about what it means for society to fail. You gave a great narrative of what is going on that is contributing to the failure, but you didn’t define what failure means. Adding concrete definitions around the failure of society would strengthen your argument.
• You talked about the current decline of women’s rights, but it would also be helpful to mention what rights they had before the Taliban. For example, what percentage of women were going to school before vs after? This kind of comparison would strengthen your argument about the decline.

Questions:

• What is the impact of these new societal norms (men having to accompany women everywhere) on female-only spaces? If men must supervise and escort women, are women still able to have private spaces like in the salon where they can be with other women alone? This might impact social interaction and safe spaces.