Edit and correct if there is any gramper error, sentence stricture, wrong words, transitional words, additional opinion or ideas on the article, paragraph structure(reconstruct paragraph if it’s nec

Edit and correct if there is any gramper error, sentence stricture, wrong words, transitional words, additional opinion or ideas on the article, paragraph structure(reconstruct paragraph if it’s necessary which means if the paragraph is to big split and make It two) write a conclusion paragraph (maximum two paragraph for conclusion). For better understanding I will attach the outline which will give you guidance while editing and correcting the paper.