Editing Challenge 4:

Editing Challenge 4: The following e-mail has problems with flabby expressions, long lead-ins, there is/are fillers, redundancies, trite business phrases, and other writing techniques you have studied.  Provide a list of the problems you found in the e-mail and revise the email utilizing the skills covered in Chapter 4. from  essentials of business communication ISBN-13: 978-1111821227