Electrical engineering personal statement Love EE said from my heart. Highly Interested in Electromagnetics and Embedded Computing Systems. Since...

Please, help me edit this two personal statement for applying electrical engineering and computer engineering department. Each one needs to be one page long and single spaced. There is a paragraph about Microsoft. NET Gadgeteer in both personal statement. You can find more information about it the links are:http://research.microsoft.com/en-us/projects/gadgeteer/http://www.microsoft.com/presspass/emea/presscentre/pressreleases/August2011/CommercialAvailabilityOfMicrosoftNETGadgeteer.mspxhttp://www.netmf.com/gadgeteer/Information about Mendocino motor:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mendocino_motor